by laguna84 on Mon Oct 26, 2009 10:27 pm
noone else type so i starts haha
first pic, crease lines on the left(normal) arm can be less even, so some crease lines can be shorter than others. then the left leg maybe can be a little shorter
anal retentive part over :d pose is great but as i said during e gathering, ur other sketches for allen's head is nice, but only one quarter of the face left here

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2nd pic, left(normal)arm look abit broken. there's a faint construction line there joining the wrist to the elbow; might be better to stick to it.
i'm wondering how should the juggling balls be placed. drawing the balls in a semi circle might not look realistic enough, as the person juggles by alternating throwing the ball in the left n right, i guess just omitting one or two balls along the semicircle will do.